Special New years Tournament (SNYT)
hey everyone!Guess what we are having a SNYT its gonna be so awesome the prize is a surprise(so you wont find out till the end) .The rules are quite practical and easy to understand!so here goes..
~finish the special short story(finishing should be around 2 paragraphs)
~make sure that your entry actually makes sense and goes with the story and picture.
~perfect grammar is not needed!(just make it readable folks,like having spaces and as less typos as possible!!:D)
~write you Vineclan name at the end of your entry so I know who it is by(so don't just write some random thing like Firestar because i won't know who you are!!)
~Have fun!(most important rule)
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Fiery woke up to find herself curled up by her twoleg.She yawned and turned over ,and made a huge *MEOOWW* as she fell of the strange -but comfy- twoleg bed.Her twoleg woke up starteled and looked around ,it had long brown fur falling from its head and had pink pelt.
Then suddenly its eyes grew wide , it got up and ran to her screeching something in its loud ,high voice.She ran out of her small den and down the strange jagged path (stairs) that Fiery detested because it was so hard to climb, yet the twolegs do it so easily it always made her feel sheepish. The twoleg kit dropped fiery next to a large green tree with shiny things on it(which smelled really really bad , it had come out of a brown box !How abnormal she didnt understand twolegs at all) .Just yesterday fiery had tried to eat one of the strange objects,she found them disgusting they lacked flavor and warmth so she stayed away form the ugly strange smelling tree.Instead she left to sulk on her small bed .She watched with narrowed eyes as her twoleg picked up a bright box and tore it open squealing with excitement,by now the other (bigger) twolegs had come down they were both also screeching and smiling.Time passed by as Fiery sat there grumply annoyed that she hadn't finished her nap.Then suddenly her twoleg (the one with long brown fur) turned and ran to fiery she showed her a small shiny box(well she shoved it up her face STILL annoyingly enough squealing ) then she tore it open and Fiery exclaimed a *MEWWOF* of surprise as she saw the...
finish the story !!The CONTEST ends on Jan 1st(no duhhhh)
All rules need to be followed!
THANKS!!HAPPY NEW YEAR~~!!
" then she tore it open and Fiery exclaimed a *MEWWOF* of surprise as she saw the..." little silver collar the twoleg with long brown fur found at a big box area (store) around her den. Fiery had disliked the little chain very much and didn't want to wear it. After a minute of staring at the strange silver chain, the brown furred twoleg took the thingy and shoved it around Fiery's neck. Fiery pulled and tugged to get the treachurous object off but it was no use, it was stuck on there. Fiery then walked up to the bigger twolegs and begged them to take it off. But since the twolegs were too busy staring at the little twoleg, Fiery went to the big furry creature (dog) and took a deep breath. She tugged at the creature's fur and it woke up. She pursuaded the big creature to rip off the chain with it's teeth, but it was no use. Fiery tried many things to get it off her neck, a shiny stick with pointy edges (fork), a object with two shiny, sharp poles (scissors), and more. She gave out a long sigh and walked upstairs to the box area with a big bowl she like to sleep in (the bathroom). She climbed into the bowl and fell asleep.
ReplyDeleteFiery woke up after quite a bit of time and stared at her neck, the stupid little shiny rope was still on her. This time it looked different, it looked shiny but brown at the same time. She took one last tug at the hard rope and SNAP! The chain broke! Fiery jumped for joy and ran downstairs to see her twolegs. But when she went up to the brown-furred twoleg, the twoleg picked her up, squealed,and then went over to the bigger twolegs. The next day the twolegs brought Fiery to the same box area where they got the annoying shiny rope. And to Fiery's surprise, the twolegs bought her yet another shiny rope.....
Thats all I got hope you like it!!!
rusty colored kitten inside. The twoleg grabbed it but it scwirmed away to explore the new nest. He batted at the shiney things on the ugly tree, and played around in the tissue paper,
ReplyDeletebut then he noticed Fiery.
He looked at her, as if inspecting her, but she must of passed the test because he gave a little squeak of delight and jumped right on to the little nest where Fiery was sitting!
Then he decided he was tired of playing so he curled up beside her and dosily batted at her tail.
"I think I'll keep him." Fiery thought, "And I think I'll name him Rusty."
Yea, its cheesy but u get it...
~♥Shadowflower♥~
uh it was a small shiny box!!! how could a kitten fit in there!!! I like it though, maybe Cinderstar will too!!! :)
ReplyDelete...A smaell kitty the color of furze (gree/yellow legume)
ReplyDeleteFiery stared at it
it stared at her
he then came up to her and sniffed her and licked her tail,
she picked up the kit and took him to te small nest
he fell asleep and later Greay up to be a strong cat named Winder
~Berryblaze
ReplyDeleteOhhh!!!!! Can I redo mine??? I did it wrong!!!
ReplyDelete" then she tore it open and Fiery exclaimed a *MEWWOF* of surprise as she saw the..." same shiny object that was on the tree. Fiery scrunched her nose up with disgust. The brown furred twoleg put the shiny object on the smelly, prickly object (tree) and ran it to Fiery. The twoleg picked up Fiery and brought her over to the smelly object Fiery did not like, and guess what it did, it stuck Fiery into the prickly, smelly thing!
After a great time of licking her fur furiously, Fiery thought it was time to plan her revenge. She stalked slowly to the smelly item and pawed the shiny object the little twoleg got. To Fiery's luck, the shiny object fell and broke into a million little pieces. While Fiery was gloating to herself, the little brown furred twoleg started wailing and ran to the bigger twolegs. Fiery knew what was going to happen. She was about to run away, but the big twolegs picked her up and started shouting at her. After all the shouting the twolegs went to the big box area with all the food. Later the little twoleg came in all happy and jumpy. It grabbed Fiery and set her on the flat, hard surface (table). To Fiery's surprise, the little twoleg brought out the shiny broken object, but this time it was back together. Fiery groaned. Then right when Fiery was about to finish her nap, the little twoleg wrapped it around he neck, and inside the shiny object was a ringing sound, so now everywhere Fiery goes, the little ringing object around her neck will chime and chime and chime....
~Twilightpaw of Vineclan~
WOW !you guys those are really good!*lol always the tone of surprise with me*
ReplyDeleteBut seriously they are!
@Silverleaf :lol silverleaf you'll have to decide wich one u wanna use !
so comment and tell me if you dnt ill just assume its the second one okay?
@Shadodwflower: awwww thats sooo sweet (cheesy but sweet)
cheesy can be good,sometimes!
@Berrystar :Lol wait who's Graey ? is he Winder?
are they he same cats??
awww he grabbed her tail !I can tottally imagine that :D!
i changed the story a little it sounds bette rnow :D (in my opinion)
ReplyDeleteWell I left out parts of the directions, cuz the directions were to match the pic and story, so I moderized it to make it match the pic, so yes the second one!!!! Thanx!!! Also Twilightfur is expecting Rowanclaw's kits. (I asked Berrystar)
ReplyDeleteNo offense at all meant Berrystar but you kinda copied mine.
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